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writemaster93 Nov 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

So I joined this group on tumblr that was against this popular tumblr group that portrays Princess Celestia as a rapist and all-around sexual predator, because that's all kinds of wrong.  The group and founder got a lot of flak for it, saying they were feminazis, they were being oversensitive, etc.  Then the group went under new management and became dedicated to fighting sexism and also racism, transphobia, homophobia, etc.  But then they started getting way too social justice.  For example, Thanksgiving is evil because of what the Americans did to the Indians, Disney is racist, sexist and lazy and Frozen proves it, white men should not complain about anything ever because of how superior they are, celebrities who do or say even the slightest insensitive thing should be globally reviled, straight people should not complain about anything because of how superior they are...

 

Now, a lot of their stuff had a lot of truth in it (like how creepy and mysoginistic bronies can be, actual sexist, homophobic, and other insensitive things), but they were basically saying that white straight people (men in particular) should feel guilty every minute of every day for how we've oppressed every other race in the world.  I mean, I'm not saying America or white staight people are perfect, but I really don't think that I deserve to feel guilty for existing because of my race, sexuality, gender, and country I live in!

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...Holy fucking SHIT... We go from My Little Pony to discrimination on people of white ethnicity?
I think that this isn't exactly what Lauren Faust had in her mind when she made the show...
Good lord, I'm quite frankly afraid of what is going to happen next, what they'll come up with.
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writemaster93 Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
People have said the MLP fandom is the new Sonic fandom.  And at times I believe them.
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writemaster93 Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Hey, dude, I need some help.  Excelsior has finally told his cohorts that the Inner Circle were the ones who sent him on the quest and they start telling him how that plan was full of holes.  Here's what I've got What was to stop you from getting help from another city?  Why didn’t they kill you?  Why didn’t they just raze your city to the ground?  What’s to stop them from not keeping their end of the deal?

 

Let me know if you come up with anything else.

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"Have you ever wondered what will they do with the stuff your getting for them?"
"If they are stronger than you then why would they need you for getting the objects? Couldn't they reach them by themselves?"
"Why are you trusting the motherf*****g spawns of evil?"
"How about if they leave your town in peace... But destory everything else on the planet thanks to the objects you got for them? Would you like to be the real cause of everyone's doom and be hated by your own city for that?"
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writemaster93 Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
To answer your first and last questions: “Besssidesss,” Khobra added.  “The SSSacred Artifactsss can’t be usssed by anyone with even an iota of evil in them!  Why would the Inner Circle want them?”
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:iconkillb94:
Dang it you're right
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writemaster93 Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So I'm stuck on the part on when Excelsior's fellows discuss why not to leave him, mostly because he's a good guy, they don't want to see him hurt, he's saved some of them, he's let them in, etc. but I'm worried that this may seem mary-suish, the supporting cast gushing about how great the main character is.
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Not unless the viewer wants the protagonist to be cheered, like if he did something really remarkable or if he's kind of a infortunate dude, seeing gim being supported would please the viewer.
...Or you could just do that but without exaggerating.

I would opt for the second, since in my opinion, from what I've seen, Excelsior's is a cool dude. He doesn't pretend to be greater than the others (heck at times he had to be rescued by one of them), he does what he has to do or at least what is the most reasonable choice... I don't really see why he should get gary-stuish complements.
OR...You could make him reciprocate them, what about that?
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